What is History?
History is anything that has happened in the past. This isn’t necessarily just important things that have happened but anything that has been seen or done. Everyone has a history of what has happened in their lives. For instance, I woke up this morning, ate breakfast, went to school, and started typing this article. My history is being made as the seconds pass by and so is everyone else’s. by the time that I have finished this essay it will be a part of my life’s history.
Of the four theories of history the one that I think is the best and most worth proving to be the whole entire concept of history is the Hegelian Theory. I am going to explain to you why I think this and what all of the theories of history are. When I am done explaining I hope that I will have grabbed your attention into why I think that the Hegelian theory is the best.
The Hegelian Theory is the most accurate way of describing how history happens through time. It is a cause and effect type concept that leads out into the final concept of the events that had happened in the past. Thesis + Antithesis= Synthesis. This is just coming from one event to the final outcome. When one thing happens another will follow in result of the starting event. For instance, in the summer X-games of 2008 a skateboarder had around 25 feet of air on a ramp, He misjudged the trajectory and lost his board and landed on his back, his shoes flew off his feet on impact and he broke his femur bone and was out for the season. This is an example of the Hegelian theory. This theory makes up the other theories.

Then there is the Vortex Theory of History. This tells us how history fluctuates through time; in how it gets Large and then small, Large and then small. This theory is pretty accurate because when you look at the timeline for the linear theory than you can see that there is a larger amount of recorded history at times than others. But in reality the amount of history being collected is always the same. As I have said before everyone will make history but not all history will be recorded for generations to come. The Vortex theory to me is the same thing is the linear theory. You place the history down where it was recorded and then you can look at it on a graph. It’s a good way to show history but not a good way of describing how it has happened. The Hegelian theory will build up to the vortex theory by placing the events inside of it to create the fluctuating changes of the vortex.
In Conclusion, as I have described all of the theories of History and how they come together to make the broad aspect of History I have been proclaiming that the Hegelian Theory is the best out of all of them. It describes every event in life and how they have came to be. These events don’t have to be important to be a part of history. History is everything that has happened in the past; but not just the important things. I can make history and so can everyone else in the world but whether the history is important enough to be recorded is the real question. As I say this last sentence I am recording this in my history.
You should pay attention to structuring your essays as arguments and using sources to support your arguments. Otherwise, there is very little for a reader to trust in what you say.
ReplyDeleteAlso, please go back and edit your work; this comes off like a rough draft.
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